Topic: The effects of steroid abuse in professional sports
Thesis: As millions of Americans observe, a seemingly continuous surge of sports icons continue being questioned and prosecuted for their alleged usage of anabolic steroids. The damaging effects of these iconic athletes poor judgment, reaches much further than their careers and respected organizations, but also convey destructive and oftentimes lifelong effects onto the nations youth.
Drew Weinbrecht
Drew, you have a very strong thesis. It is a little long, but it presents the topic with a valid argument.
ReplyDeleteI think that this is a good topic. A point that you may like to include is the effect that the steroids have on the players body and minds themselves
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good topic. I think you should be sure to include some specific examples of athletes who have used steroids. I can't wait to see what the rest of your paper looks like!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good thesis, but it needs heavy grammar work.
ReplyDelete-Candace