Topic: The benefits of the legalization of marijuana and how it could help to provide aid to our country’s current economic position.
Thesis: Currently America is facing financial hardships that at the present seem to be taking devastating tolls on the country from an economic standpoint, but with the legalization of marijuana America could help close the gap to achieving economic security.
M. Drake
I think you should include specifically how legalizing marijuana would help the economy.
ReplyDeleteHow would the legalization of marijuana solve economic problems? Not really an argument if you say that legalizing marijuana could help the economy. Make sure you make a statement that someone can argue against.
ReplyDeleteIf you include reasons for opposing the legalization of marijuana then I think this topic can be successful. Maybe alter your thesis a little so that you can include the counter argument.
ReplyDeleteDrew Weinbrecht
I agree.
ReplyDelete-Candace