Thesis: In our culture today teenagers are inundated by the mass media with pictures, videos, and advertisements of perfect body images and what our society deems attractive. This influx of information can cause the youth of our society to strive for unrealistic body expectations, which can be dangerous when great lengths are taken to achieve them such as, but not limited to, anorexia, bulimia, plastic surgery, and other harmful methods.
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I like the evidence provided in your thesis. It provides the proper evidence needed to be a successful argument, but somewhat lacks the direction needed to "roadmap," if you will, like a thesis should be. Your thesis is good, but needs to show where your argument will go from here: ie- an attack on the media, the effects of eating disorders, etc.
ReplyDeleteThesis sounds great! What are the specific topics that your paper will discuss?
ReplyDeletegreat topic and amazing thesis. try to find real stories who had eating disorders because of the images shown in magazines. i read in people the other day "How can teenagers love their bodies when we are dissing a size 2 woman?"
ReplyDeleteGreat topic. Definitely a very applicable topic. Good thesis statement; maybe a little bit long, but overall good.
ReplyDeleteGood. I'm interested in seeing your proposal.
ReplyDelete-Candace